Hi Carra, this is a great presentation. I love how you have included a title page so we know what topic you are talking about. I also like that you have used vibrant images in your work and also used headings. Well done. Your next steps is to make sure that you preview your blog post and make sure that you image fits the page as at the moment it is too big and has gone off the page. Also it would be great if you included a WALT and a description about something interesting your learnt about sleep. Keep up the great work!!
Hi Carra, I liked your work but make sure the blog post can fit and that the presentation has more work and less pictures, but although your work is great. Signed by your best friend, Edith
Hi Carra, this is a great presentation. I love how you have included a title page so we know what topic you are talking about. I also like that you have used vibrant images in your work and also used headings. Well done. Your next steps is to make sure that you preview your blog post and make sure that you image fits the page as at the moment it is too big and has gone off the page. Also it would be great if you included a WALT and a description about something interesting your learnt about sleep. Keep up the great work!!
ReplyDeleteHi Carra,
ReplyDeleteI liked your work but make sure the blog post can fit and that the presentation has more work and less pictures, but although your work is great.
Signed by your best friend,
Edith